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Ocean Gypsy, Sentinel of the Deep

Scattered Souls

By Tina D'AngeloPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Ocean Gypsy, Sentinel of 
              the Deep
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Lone sentinel of the deep, perched above the crashing sea

Opal scales, sea grass hair, mossy arms reaching out

Eyes reflecting the color of the hazy sky

Changing, ever-changing with the tide

Ocean Gypsy wails her siren song

Seducing scores of weary sailors through the ages

As they search for a safe haven from the storm

Her tragic melody calls them to rest

In the security of her calm, moonlit pool

Just beyond the shattering rocks

Scattered thoughtlessly

By the gods of fate and destruction

The mermaid's soprano lilt echoes coldly in their faces

Like the howling wind and the pounding rain

Lightning flashing and thunder crashing

Hushing their plaintive human cries

Dashing their hopes at the last minute

As they are cut down and drowned

By their foolish hopes of a strange lover's true intent

She watches in stony silence

With a mysterious smile on her granite lips

Lone sentinel of the deep, perched above the crashing sea

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About the Creator

Tina D'Angelo

G-Is for String is now available in Ebook, paperback and audiobook by Audible!

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G-Is for String: Oh, Canada! and Save One Bullet are also available on Amazon in Ebook and Paperback.

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    Tina I really appreciate the darkness and overall melancholy feel of this piece. I can vividly see the mermaid luring her victims to their doom! I also found it a nice touch to end with the same phrase you started with! 💜

  • Mark Gagnon11 months ago

    Tina, you know I'm not a poetry fan, however, I can make an exception with this one. The atmosphere you generated with your story was captivating. Well done.

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