I do not love you anymore, I think I never loved you at all
I just created my own version of you and let myself fall
Maybe it was my delusions, maybe it was all your lies,
Maybe my commonsense drowned in the ocean of your eyes,
Now I realise the person I longed for, was never really there
And the man that is, men like him are not all that rare
Now I see a selfish man, who added nothing constructive,
I see a stubborn egomaniac, who is so self-destructive
I see the reality of what's been, the promises you never kept,
All the subtle putdowns, and the frequent disrespect,
All the damage you caused, the behaviour I would excuse
I see the real person behind the man I was so scared to lose,
I don't see a blue-eyed angel, I don't see a gift from above,
I'm not sure what I feel for you, but it sure as hell isn't love,
Maybe I just feel grief, from mourning all the time I lost,
Or maybe I just miss myself, and the person that I was,
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Sanna
I write, I drink coffee, I go on adventures and then write some more.
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