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A guy that I knew was alone,
With every swipe left he would groan,
The girl of his dreams,
Walked past him it seems,
Cause he never looked up from his phone.
About the Creator
the Phuzz
Unfocused imaginator hoping to psych myself into getting some things out of my overstuffed mind.
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What I Would Do if I Joined Vocal Today
I'd do things a bit different if I joined Vocal today instead of February 2021. For one thing; the platform itself has changed quite a lot. Acting on input from its writer/creators many enhancements to the reporting, pay structure, engagement, and even ownership possibilities are now in place. (Yes- I am aware that not every change has been greeted with approval. This is not that: I am focusing on what I would do differently today.)
By Judey Kalchik 6 days ago in Writers
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Omg - it looks to me like you submitted more than one winner to this challenge! Impressive: funny & incisive.