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Noticeable Effects

breaking the curse and bringing peace to the town.

By bishnu prasadPublished 5 months ago ā€¢ 1 min read
Noticeable Effects
Photo by Ilona Panych on Unsplash

In a small town nestled between rolling hills, there lived a peculiar girl named Eliza. She possessed an extraordinary ability - whenever she touched an object, its true nature would be revealed to her.

This gift, however, came with a price. Every time she used her power,

Eliza would undergo noticeable effects, experiencing the emotions and memories associated with the object.

One day, a mysterious antique shop appeared at the edge of town, drawing the attention of the curious townsfolk. Intrigued, Eliza ventured inside and was immediately drawn to an ornate mirror.

As her fingertips brushed its surface, a flood of emotions overwhelmed her. She saw the mirror's history, filled with love, loss, and longing.

Unbeknownst to Eliza, the mirror was cursed, trapping the souls of those who gazed into it. With her noticeable effects taking a toll on her, she made it her mission to free the trapped souls and break the curse.

Through her journey, Eliza faced the anguish and joy of past souls, experiencing the noticeable effects of her power more intensely than ever before.

Ultimately, Eliza's determination and empathy prevailed, and she freed the souls from the mirror's grasp, breaking the curse and bringing peace to the town.

Though she continued to endure the noticeable effects of her gift, Eliza found solace in knowing that she had used her extraordinary ability to bring about positive change in the world.

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  • Anna 5 months ago

    Very well written! Good job!šŸ„°

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