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Nothing at All

Before one of the first inventions

By Thavien YliasterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Nothing at All
Photo by Shifaaz shamoon on Unsplash

She has everything to wear

Yet for all the refinery I couldn't care

Clothing's a mistake

Why hide such a shape?

In all honesty, I prefer seeing her bare

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Author's Notes: This limerick was originally commented on Naomi's limerick, "Nothing."

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Thavien Yliaster

Thank You for stopping by. Please, make yourself comfortable. I'm a novice poet, fiction writer, and dream journalist.

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  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    The art of the naked body

  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    This is really good Thavien. You definitely have a talent for writing limericks.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    This one needed it's own attention! Wonderfully sweet and sexy :) Great work!!

  • Lol ❤️💯You got it❗❗

  • I'm so glad you're publishing your comment limericks! Yay! This was fantastic!

  • Brenton Fabout a year ago

    In my humble opinion this piece has really lifted the bar for limericking. Subtle, swank and sexy!

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