Nothing at All
Before one of the first inventions
She has everything to wear
Yet for all the refinery I couldn't care
Clothing's a mistake
Why hide such a shape?
In all honesty, I prefer seeing her bare
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Author's Notes: This limerick was originally commented on Naomi's limerick, "Nothing."
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The art of the naked body
This is really good Thavien. You definitely have a talent for writing limericks.
This one needed it's own attention! Wonderfully sweet and sexy :) Great work!!
Lol ❤️💯You got it❗❗
I'm so glad you're publishing your comment limericks! Yay! This was fantastic!
In my humble opinion this piece has really lifted the bar for limericking. Subtle, swank and sexy!