Night Waves, Love Raves
Our first night at the beach together.
It was like we were living within a story.
I didn't think it could be real.
That I could actually live like I was the main character in the romance.
While it all felt surreal, I knew this was pure happiness.
I sunk into your eyes, as the vast night sky enclosed us into a bubble;
of our own.
The waves pushed and pulled at our ankles, but we remained solid.
We were together, and our foundation with one another,
keeps us sturdy.
The frigid water which turned my feet to ice,
was no match for the electricity you used to heat my body.
Glistening eyes in the moonlight spoke only of admiration and passion.
Running along the sand, hand in hand, looking out into the dark depths,
then back at you, felt infinite.
You kissed me under the stars.
You shared my excitment in finding shells,
even though we were looking in the dark.
As always when with you I wasn't just alive, I felt alive, because of you.
About the Creator
Ariana Yeager
But, what if it does work out?
She walks through Hell with a smile because she owns her demons.
Don't say why me, say try me.
If you can't beat the fear, do it scared.
You only live once? False. You live everyday.
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