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Night Becomes Today

… with shadows chased away.

By Tim GracePublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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What by night would well-appear

then by day be hidden?

The candlestick, the chandelier;

as by day their use be ridden.

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What by night is wide awake

and then by day retires?

The possum by a moonlit lake,

as of dawn his work expires.

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What by night would drain the sky

and then by day refill it?

Last night’s shadow passing by,

of course, just as time would will it.

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The moon by sun is chased away,

that’s how last night becomes today.

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© Tim Grace, 3 January 2011

Revised 14 February 2023

Sonnet
5

About the Creator

Tim Grace

A first impression has a lasting effect - it makes a notable difference. In a subtle way that’s who I am as a poet. A ‘first impression’ looking for the gentle ‘twist’ that draws attention to a novel observation.

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  • Emos Sibu Poriei (Kaya)3 months ago

    Wow! BEST!

  • Oooo, this was so deep and thought provoking! Loved your poem!

  • Jazzy 3 months ago

    This repetition was delicious for my brain

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    Fantastic poem!

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