New Year's Resolutions.
Mikeydred's End Of 2022 Poetry Challenge - Holly Pheni
This is a series of short sonnets based on suggestions by Vocal friends. I will include a suitable video as well. The original challenge piece is at the end of this poem.
The challenge is βgive me a subject and five words and I will try and create a sonnetβ.
This is from Holly Pheni:
Subject: New Year's Resolutions
Words: Cookies, Rainbows, Tires, Surfers, Lightbulb.
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Cookies With You On New Year's Eve
The Storm Has Gone, Rainbows We See
Relaxing On These Tractor Tires
By The Ocean Watching Surfers
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Another Lightbulb Blew, Oh Hell
We Should Have Had A Spare, Oh Well
That's A New Year's Resolution
We Can Always Have A Light On
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Our Ocean Shack, So Relaxing
Tomorrow We Will Be Surfing
Sit On The Beach, Make Resolutions
To Make Some Noise, Start Revolutions
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We'll Bake Some Cookies, That'll Be Fun
Lounge On These Tires, Enjoy The Sun
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Brilliant work! So fun! Bravo Mike! ππΎππΎππΎππΎ
Such an enjoyable poem!
I'm so amazed at your talent to write a wonderful poem using just 5 words and a subject as your prompt. Loved this poem!
Excellent!!!πππ
Great Job!
nicely done.
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