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New Year's Resolutions.

Mikeydred's End Of 2022 Poetry Challenge - Holly Pheni

By Mike Singleton - MikeydredPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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This is a series of short sonnets based on suggestions by Vocal friends. I will include a suitable video as well. The original challenge piece is at the end of this poem.

The challenge is β€œgive me a subject and five words and I will try and create a sonnet”.

This is from Holly Pheni:

Subject: New Year's Resolutions

Words: Cookies, Rainbows, Tires, Surfers, Lightbulb.

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Cookies With You On New Year's Eve

The Storm Has Gone, Rainbows We See

Relaxing On These Tractor Tires

By The Ocean Watching Surfers

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Another Lightbulb Blew, Oh Hell

We Should Have Had A Spare, Oh Well

That's A New Year's Resolution

We Can Always Have A Light On

πŸŒžπŸŒˆπŸŒ›

Our Ocean Shack, So Relaxing

Tomorrow We Will Be Surfing

Sit On The Beach, Make Resolutions

To Make Some Noise, Start Revolutions

πŸŒžπŸŒˆπŸŒ›

We'll Bake Some Cookies, That'll Be Fun

Lounge On These Tires, Enjoy The Sun

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Mike Singleton - Mikeydred

Weaver of Tales, Poems, Music & Love

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  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Brilliant work! So fun! Bravo Mike! πŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎπŸ‘πŸΎ

  • Poppy about a year ago

    Such an enjoyable poem!

  • I'm so amazed at your talent to write a wonderful poem using just 5 words and a subject as your prompt. Loved this poem!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Excellent!!!πŸ’•πŸ’–πŸ˜Š

  • Angelina F. Thomasabout a year ago

    Great Job!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    nicely done.

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