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An iatdouziac

By Deasun T. SmythPublished about a year ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
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Of gold and silver readily bought

Of honour and virtues we had fought.

Danger doesn’t know us… yet

We’re too strong for us to fret.

Peace.

(This was a poem done in ‘Scarlian’ style. It consists usually of 4 lines (which doesn’t have to rhyme), and always has a single word ending. And anywhere between 20 - 50 words long. This style of poetry is called ‘iatdouziac’, which is Scarlian for ‘a composer of poetry’, Scarlian often has a single word that means entire sentences in English. So the single word at the end would have more meaning, meaning there is a bit of translation lost. Below is another example of ‘iatdouziac’).

Often though, we like to sit —

Underneath the pine tree shade.

No, we wouldn't find it soon

where the wild wind was formed.

serenity.

Another example:

Rabid beast, wolves do come

Surrounded me, from who knows from.

With blood-shot eyes

And moon bought cries

Help!

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About the Creator

Deasun T. Smyth

I’m a First Nations 17 year old young man, probably an old soul (not that there's anything wrong with that). I live in Saskatchewan, and I love reading, writing, conlanging, and collecting sarcastic T-shirts.

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)12 months ago

    Wow, This is Great❗

  • Cathy holmes12 months ago

    This is a fascinating style and you do it beautifully. Well done.

  • Veronica Coldiron12 months ago

    Nicely done, sir!!

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