Fire snaps and crackles,
Blissful warmth surrounds us, swathed
in serenity.
Purged of Earthly grime
By purifying steamy
Air, our souls rejoice.
Fragrant branches green,
Of leafy Birch, tapped gently,
Render skin aglow.
Quick plunge in waters
Deep, purified now wholly
Blissfully revived.
About the Creator
Lea Waske
I left Vocal last spring to publish "Where the Bush Planes Flew", a memoir & history of a remote northern Ontario FN with Indigenous artist, Saul J. Williams.& "A Yuletide Adventure",3rd in my children's series. (Both on Amazon)
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Snow Need to Rush
I watched my breath form a small white cloud as it puffed out of my lips and dissipated before my eyes. I rubbed my hands together, blowing into them with the precious bit of warm air that remained in my lungs. My leg bounced as I stared into the cold dark world beyond the windows of my truck as they remained partially fogged up.
By Donna Fox (HKB)5 days ago in Fiction
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I felt rejuvenated after reading this! So many lovely phrases. Wonderful!
nicely done.
Nice and peaceful. Love it.