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Narcissist

An acrostic

By E.K. DanielsPublished 12 days ago 1 min read
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Narcissist
Photo by Sander Sammy on Unsplash

Ego, the Big Bang, fills space, kills time, subdues the atmosphere

Casts long shadows where stars once shined.

Luminosity of speckled stardust dimmed, unnoticed in the glow of the self-absorbed orbit.

Invisible becomes the worth of others, as they bask in the center, a sun in their own universe.

Pulling all the oxygen out of a room, as if by force. The gravity!

Silently, victim’s esteem erodes in the penumbra,

Each careful calculation meant to cast a shadow of doubt.

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About the Creator

E.K. Daniels

Writer, watercolorist, and regular at the restaurant at the end of the universe. Twitter @inkladen

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  • Mika Oka4 days ago

    They suck out the light of everyone around them

  • Gigi Gibson10 days ago

    Looks like we’re soul-sisters… I wrote on the same subject for the same challenge. Welcome! 🫶🏻

  • Oooo, this was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic!

  • OneWithPen11 days ago

    I enjoyed the intensity of your writing. Both the imagery and the weight within your descriptions, and I look forward to read your next writings.

  • Good one.

  • Grz Colm12 days ago

    Hey E.K. “The gravity!” - That’s a good description for the feelings encountered. 😊👏

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