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MY THOUGHTS TURN TO ICE

Walk away now please it’s over

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 16 days ago • 1 min read
By Marie381Uk 2026

MY THOUGHTS TURN TO ICE

I loved you, I loved you so much,
Every day I worshipped your ground.
Then suddenly you wasnt the person
I wanted around.

You were bad tempered every day,
Quick to point your finger at me.
You talked about all that I did wrong,
But your own faults you couldnt see.

You even stopped the music,
Because I was singing along.
You took the happiness out of me,
Just for singing a song.

All that warm love in my body,
Suddenly turned to ice.
When I realised deep inside,
You wasnt all that nice.

I saw you through rose coloured glasses,
But now those glasses are broke.
I finally see the man you are,
And love has gone up in smoke.

My thoughts have turned to ice now,
My heart is frozen like snow.
The love I once had inside me,
Has finally let you go.

So pack your bags and get out,
Walk straight out through that door.
Because if youre here in ten more minutes,
You wont be here no more.

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

My poems heal, some haunt, all are pieces of me.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk