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My Sweetheart

Sleeping Beauty

By Ruth StewartPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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My Sweetheart
Photo by Михаил Калегин on Unsplash

My sweetheart lies in bed

Her blonde hair spread out over her silk pillowcase.

What will she dream tonight?

I wish her Akhal Teke horses, golden in the sun

Playing chase with them, loving them,

I wish her dreams of dog friends, old and new,

And in this world where dreams are true,

I wish her health, legs that run, arms that reach,

To touch and stroke and love and dance

And be all she can be.

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About the Creator

Ruth Stewart

I'm a grandmother of four amazing grandchildren and a mum of three fabulous children. I write poetry mainly, also prose and the odd story. I live in Scotland, UK. For a secret link to watch me read my favourite poems click right here!

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  • Grz Colm5 months ago

    Nice work Ruth! 😊 I am a fan of questions mid verse. You feel like you are partaking as opposed to a casual observer.

  • Hannah Moore5 months ago

    Oh, I love this.

  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    This was dreamy and lovely to my mind ❤️

  • Kristen Balyeat8 months ago

    Such a beautiful picture of love you painted with your words. Dreamy and sweet! Loved this! Don't know how I missed out on your work for so long!

  • Beautiful, thank you for sharing this. I could really feel this scene you painted so magically ✨🤍

  • Adenubi John10 months ago

    Nice

  • MARIE ODEMS 11 months ago

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!

  • Faisal Bilal11 months ago

    https://vocal.media/confessions/when-love-dies-kt6p056z

  • Jacob Damian11 months ago

    Such a sweet words from this poem keep it up

  • Real Poetic11 months ago

    So positive and lovely. 👏🏼

  • Brenton F11 months ago

    Your image brought this to mind - https://youtu.be/S_3vZYOYNYU

  • Abdul Ahad11 months ago

    Amazing story I like it too much you can also view mine https://vocal.media/01/the-silent-revolution

  • Manish Kumar Verma11 months ago

    Nice...

  • very good

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • Cezanne Libellen11 months ago

    Such a sweet poem!! Love it so much!🥰

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    Gorgeous and so hopeful. 😍 Very well done; congrats on Top Story!! 🤗❤️

  • Poppy 11 months ago

    This is beautiful. Congrats on top story

  • Brenton F11 months ago

    Beautiful!

  • Gorgeous Piece✨💖🎉Congratulations on your Top Story❗

  • Donna Renee11 months ago

    How beautiful!! ❤️❤️

  • i love the content

  • Gerald Holmes11 months ago

    Your words touched me. This is beautiful writing. Congrats on the Top Story and you just got a new subscriber.

  • Test11 months ago

    Congrats 💎

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