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My Sweetheart

Sleeping Beauty

By Ruth StewartPublished 18 days ago Updated 18 days ago 1 min read
My Sweetheart
Photo by Михаил Калегин on Unsplash

My sweetheart lies in bed

Her blonde hair spread out over her silk pillowcase.

What will she dream tonight?

I wish her Akhal Teke horses, golden in the sun

Playing chase with them, loving them,

I wish her dreams of dog friends, old and new,

And in this world where dreams are true,

I wish her health, legs that run, arms that reach,

To touch and stroke and love and dance

And be all she can be.

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Ruth Stewart

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  • MARIE ODEMS 8 days ago


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  • Jacob Damian14 days ago

    Such a sweet words from this poem keep it up

  • Real Poetic14 days ago

    So positive and lovely. 👏🏼

  • Brenton F15 days ago

    Your image brought this to mind - https://youtu.be/S_3vZYOYNYU

  • Abdul Ahad15 days ago

    Amazing story I like it too much you can also view mine https://vocal.media/01/the-silent-revolution

  • Nice...

  • very good

  • Cathy holmes16 days ago

    Congrats on the TS

  • Cezanne Libellen16 days ago

    Such a sweet poem!! Love it so much!🥰

  • Gina C.16 days ago

    Gorgeous and so hopeful. 😍 Very well done; congrats on Top Story!! 🤗❤️

  • Poppy the Poet16 days ago

    This is beautiful. Congrats on top story

  • Brenton F16 days ago


  • Gorgeous Piece✨💖🎉Congratulations on your Top Story❗

  • Donna Renee16 days ago

    How beautiful!! ❤️❤️

  • i love the content

  • Gerald Holmes16 days ago

    Your words touched me. This is beautiful writing. Congrats on the Top Story and you just got a new subscriber.

  • Heather Hubler16 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story, Ruth!! Glad you took a chance :)

  • Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Paul Stewart16 days ago

    Yay, so excited and glad this got given Top Story, well done, hon! :)

  • AWWWWW...I've subscribed, so lovely

  • Bella17 days ago

    This was so sweet.

  • Phil Flannery17 days ago


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