I never thought
Puppy love could amount to anything,
And then, I saw you across the room.
*
Your deep, brown eyes drew me to you.
Your light hair glistened in the bright lighting.
I couldn't wait to touch you.
*
I could tell you were intrigued by me too.
Your body language and expression reflected that fact.
You ran to me.
*
Then, you stopped short,
Shyly glancing down and then back into my eyes.
We tentatively hugged.
*
You lost your inhibition
And showered my face with kisses.
I laughed when you tickled my neck.
*
From that first awkward, glorious meeting,
Our friendship grew beyond measure.
I'll never forget when I experienced
My first puppy love.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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