My Precious Wind.....
A fascinating dream journey by, P.A.Vinura Jayasanka
Don't remember,
when I started,
feeling you,
anyway, there's no need,
to think about it,
as I feel you right now,
so my precious wind,
you come, hug and cuddle me,
and suddenly vanish away,
as if you never,
going to return,
but right when,
I recall you,
you come up as usual,
have I ever seen you?
NO! Never!
then how do I feel,
you so much like this?
I've heard you murmuring,
whispering, and giggling,
with trees and high hills,
that's how I used to find you,
But I certainly know,
how rapidly you can,
turn into a severe storm,
with a huge rage of fury,
and I also know,
how you burst into tears,
and weep solemnly,
when you find the truth,
it's the way I feel you,
and draw a picture of some kind,
on you, I know that will,
never be the real picture of you,
so my precious wind,
you take my sweat,
tiredness and despair,
in a mind-relieving way,
and give me,
a chilling and sweet feeling,
that I don't know to say,
when I smoothly, investigate,
your behavior is a mystery,
you carry countless molecules,
and tons of tiny droplets,
to a destination, I have never seen,
I can touch you- I thought for a while,
then I understood,
you are perfectly intangible,
but I can feel you,
so my precious wind,
I love to witness,
you hang around me,
as far as I live.....
About the Creator
P.A.Vinura Jayasanka
Hi! I'm an Engineering student who is passionate on poetry and movie critiques with mastering both creative and analytical aspects. You can follow me on facebook:
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Comments (2)
Well done nature lover!
Beautifully captures the ephemeral essence of the wind's presence. Keep up the great work!