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My Mam liked you

My Dad liked you,so where did it go wrong for us?

By ♿ V+ Marie381Uk Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

My Mam liked you.

The first time my mam saw you,

I think she had a crush on you.

She warned me not to let you go.

She said we were the perfect match.

I knew I had had found the greatest catch.

I loved every inch of you,

and you knew I worshipped you.

I just wanted us two.

But life had other plans for you,

And before I knew it,

I had lost you.

You were the fire,

you kept me warm

The hands that held me,

A heart that kept me from harm.

You know fate is a cruel thief,

stealing what’s most true,

And now I sleep alone,

dreaming only of you.

Where did it all go wrong ?

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♿ V+ Marie381Uk

Poetry has lived in me since childhood.

Ink spills the feelings words fear to say.

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    Written by ♿ V+ Marie381Uk