My Late Father
A Villanelle
My father was always late
I’d sit sadly sulking on the stairs, and trying not to shed a tear
He was always worth the wait
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I’d sit there patiently for every painful minute it’d take
Because I knew my dad loved me, it’s not that he doesn’t want to be here
My father was always late
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Sometimes if it was too long, I’d make up a case,
“He’s taking care of my grandmother” or “he’s probably rescuing a deer”
He was always worth the wait
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I think back to those moments when my heart would ache and shake
And a teacher, or a coach, or my mother would sneer,
My father was always late
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But I would never worry that he’d forgot the date
It was me, I just didn’t say the time close enough to his ear
He was always worth the wait
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I can still see his slow motion stroll, the big smile on his face
And the embrace from his arms when he’d finally appear…
My father was always late
He was always worth the wait…
About the Creator
Alexis Dean Jr.
Alexis “L.E.X” Dean Jr. is a clean Hip-Hop artist, poet, and educator from Milwaukee, WI. As a writer and music artist, he focuses on the importance of educating through his words and stories...
IG: @DreamsStartYoung
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Comments (5)
I love your expression of worthiness in this poem, and I love the message you send to the world, which is that your father was always worth waiting for, even though he was always late. I loved reading this one.
Emotional and wonderfully written, Very well deserved Top Story.
Lovely piece with some aching sadness. Congrats on the TS.
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A lovely poem about your father.