My First Thoughts
Across the room
I saw you across the crowded conference room.
I was smitten just like that - boom!
You were smiling at someone. I tried to keep my beating heart at bay.
I wanted so badly for you to smile at me that way.
*
But my first thoughts were:
I'm probably not as smart
........as good looking
........as tall
........as unique
........as worthy
*
Would I even get a first chance?
Would you even give me a second glance?
Then I scolded myself for the negativity.
I wanted you to know the positive me.
*
I am smart enough
........good looking enough
........tall enough
........unique enough
........worthy enough
*
I approached and you smiled at me that way.
I was never the same after that fateful day.
Our love has grown since meeting in the crowd.
For ignoring my first thoughts, I am truly proud.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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