Dense clouds appear gray.
Bright sun is rising right through.
I absorb its rays.
⛅️ ☀️
My perfect day is
every day that I wake up
to see a new day.
🗽 🗽
Today, I woke up
in New York City for the
Harry Potter show.
🍕 🍕
Smells are not pleasant.
Pizza on every corner.
Lovely day to me!
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Comments (14)
Awesome!!! Love this!!!💕❤️❤️
I really love this. I feel a gratefulness in your words - that you are happy to live life!
Nice response to the challenge. I love the pizza on every corner one especially, such a great sense of the moment. Hope the trip was fun!
Harry Potter and Pizza. Two things I love! Awesomeeee Haikus!
Nice work. Sounds terrific. ☺️👏 What was the Harry Potter show R.P?
Great piece <3
Nicely done RP! I swear I've gotta get there one day soon!
I grew up in Brooklyn and visited the "city" often. Between the odors of the sewers and the aromas of the pizza and bagel shops, NYC is a hard place to forget. Thank you for bringing back such wonderful memories.
Fantastic! I especially love the second one. My perfect day is every day that I wake up! That is such a great perspective on life! I want to print that on a coffee mug.
Nice📝😁
Omg this is so fun! I wish I was in New York City!!!💕😩
Lol, pizza on every corner. That would definitely be a good day for me. Thank you for sharing!
great haiku, Poetic. Love it.
Love this Haiku!