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My Divine Day

A Haiku for Jazzy’s Challenge

By Real PoeticPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
My Divine Day
Photo by Brigitta Schneiter on Unsplash

Dense clouds appear gray.

Bright sun is rising right through.

I absorb its rays.

⛅️ ☀️

My perfect day is

every day that I wake up

to see a new day.

🗽 🗽

Today, I woke up

in New York City for the

Harry Potter show.

🍕 🍕

Smells are not pleasant.

Pizza on every corner.

Lovely day to me!

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  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Awesome!!! Love this!!!💕❤️❤️

  • ThatWriterWoman2 months ago

    I really love this. I feel a gratefulness in your words - that you are happy to live life!

  • Rob Angeli2 months ago

    Nice response to the challenge. I love the pizza on every corner one especially, such a great sense of the moment. Hope the trip was fun!

  • Harry Potter and Pizza. Two things I love! Awesomeeee Haikus!

  • Grz Colm3 months ago

    Nice work. Sounds terrific. ☺️👏 What was the Harry Potter show R.P?

  • Tiffany Gordon 3 months ago

    Nicely done RP! I swear I've gotta get there one day soon!

  • Margaret Brennan3 months ago

    I grew up in Brooklyn and visited the "city" often. Between the odors of the sewers and the aromas of the pizza and bagel shops, NYC is a hard place to forget. Thank you for bringing back such wonderful memories.

  • RM Stockton3 months ago

    Fantastic! I especially love the second one. My perfect day is every day that I wake up! That is such a great perspective on life! I want to print that on a coffee mug.

  • Nice📝😁

  • Jazzy 3 months ago

    Omg this is so fun! I wish I was in New York City!!!💕😩

  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Lol, pizza on every corner. That would definitely be a good day for me. Thank you for sharing!

  • Mother Combs3 months ago

    great haiku, Poetic. Love it.

  • Alex H Mittelman 3 months ago

    Love this Haiku!

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