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My Blue Heart

A Haiku

By Shelley CarrollPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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My Blue Heart
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The pain inside me

Like a perpetual bruise

Lingers like our love

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About the Creator

Shelley Carroll

Ms. Carroll is a 50-something year-old retired public servant and mother of three adult children. She and her partner Hal live in Amherst NS with a sweet, anxiety-ridden rescue dog. Shelley loves reading, running and red wine.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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