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My Bedroom

I want to sleep, but...

By Sone KramerPublished 6 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2023
39

I want to sleep, but

there are strangers in my bed; I

live on my friend’s couch.

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(drawing by my friend, Tong, of his couch)

childrens poetry
39

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Sone Kramer

navigating earth

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  • Raymond G. Taylor6 months ago

    Great senryu and love the illustration. Congrats on your win!

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    😁 Hey, good one! Congrats on your runner up prize! 😊👏

  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    Not the best way to make new friends - or maybe... LOL congratulations!

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Congratulations!

  • Kristen Balyeat6 months ago

    Haha! Yeah, that's awkward. lol! Love the image on this one!

  • tarun bhatt6 months ago

    I have been there

  • E.K. Daniels6 months ago

    Relatable.

  • Melissa Ingoldsby6 months ago

    💓

  • Rachel Deeming6 months ago

    Some people are so inconsiderate especially when there's floor that's perfectly good to sit on.

  • Margaret Brennan6 months ago

    I always found it difficult to sleep in anyone's house. Still do. I'm too aware that, while walls really don't talk, sometimes, they do, and I just might hear every word.

  • Joe Patterson6 months ago

    Gotta love company.

  • Jennifer David6 months ago

    Relateable and rough. yikes! love the image

  • Dylan 6 months ago

    I love it! 😂 Great Senryu!

  • Oh nooooo! That's definitely awkward. And inconvenient.

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