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My Beautiful Enigma

For Randy Baker's Prompted Challenge

By Paul StewartPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
55
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whisper a sweet serenade in my ear

as your words cascade down my body

like a waterfall of poetry

drenching me, claiming me

as your velvet embrace

draws me in

--

moan an ethereal melody to my soul

as your tones burn through my body

like a fiery, passionate ode

scorching me, owning me

as your velvet embrace

draws me in

forever lost in your labyrinth

--

my beautiful enigma

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Thanks for reading!

Author's Notes: This is my take on Randy Baker's awesome first, unofficial challenge, which you can find more about here:

Stream of Consciousnessperformance poetryOdelove poemsinspirationalGratitudeFree VerseBallad
55

About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Anna 3 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳

  • Test4 months ago

    Sensational work! Keep up the excellence—congrats!

  • Grz Colm4 months ago

    Hubba hubba!! 👏😁

  • Annetta Brown4 months ago

    Very good, I love it

  • ROCK 4 months ago

    Word weaver! Well done Sir Paul! Congratulations on Top Dog!

  • John Cox4 months ago

    Congratulations on top story, Paul! Well deserved!

  • Marilyn Glover4 months ago

    Words and image are magical. Congratulations on top story!

  • Gerald Holmes4 months ago

    This is beautifully written, Paul, and very deserving of the Top Story. Congrats.

  • Rachel Deeming4 months ago

    Blimey. This is all a bit steamy in a nice wordy way. Love is in the air obviously. I suppose it is February and all that. Nice work, chum.

  • Kodah4 months ago

    Beautiful poem! Congrats on top story💕

  • Hannah Moore4 months ago

    Lovely. You've gone full on romance poem here.

  • Lovely words

  • Brenton F4 months ago

    What a beautiful and thoughtful piece! Congrats on Top Story!

  • Donna Fox (HKB)4 months ago

    Paul this was breath taking and emotionally charged!! Great work and congrats on Top Story!! Also, thank you for the reminder to check out Randy's challenge. I meant to the other day but got distracted!!

  • Heather Zieffle 4 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • ThatWriterWoman4 months ago

    You have a beautiful connection to passionate romance in these pieces Paul! Very well written!

  • So sensual… really well done and deserved top story Paul 🤍🌟🦋

  • JBaz4 months ago

    wonderful word choice and the way in which you use them brings out a natural flow. Paul you are an angel poet disguised as a Scot.

  • Mackenzie Davis4 months ago

    Congrats on TS!!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • D. J. Reddall4 months ago

    Deftly done!

  • Bravery TE Walker4 months ago

    Gorgeous.

  • Melissa Ingoldsby4 months ago

    Very romantic and soft, lovely job as always

  • Novel Allen4 months ago

    So full of lyrics is our poetic Paul. Beautifully done, congrats on TS. Great entry here.

  • Mije Mwanza 4 months ago

    Beautiful work

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