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Mr. Moon


By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published about a year ago 1 min read
Mr. Moon
Photo by Benjamin Voros on Unsplash

Everything’s shady except for you...

How do you stand there in the darkness, and still shine through?

you have seen me unbalanced, yet you still watch my life...

I stay up late just to see you again.

I want you to teach me how to face the twilight, and still, shine bright...

Lucky you are, to constantly Party with the stars...

As a child, I watched you Never Go Far...

Maybe change your Shade but never your Texture...

Now and then you appear as a Crescent...

I speak to you but I wonder if you get my Message 💬

High up in the sky, you watch everyone Pass by...

I wonder if you've met the Sun?

Did you know that You guys Both share the sky?

I would come to visit if I could Fly...

One day I'll Grasp,

The White Snowball Stuck in the sky at Night!

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  • Veronica Coldironabout a year ago

    I love your use of contrast to relay strong feelings. Truly beautiful

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Let me know when you go- I’ll tag along

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    Very mesmerizing!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    So beautiful! Amazing work!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    this is a wonderful piece. Love it.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Beautiful 💕💖😊

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Love it

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  • Rick Henry Christopher about a year ago

    Great symbolism with a hint of nostalgia and romanticism. Well done!!!

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