Morning Sunshine
A short diminishing syllable poem to start up your day
Across the sea, in a marvellous scene
As the sun reveals itself to me
Its shine glistens upon saline
Captures the soul, unseen
Mind ever so serene
For the day ahead
Ready. Pristine
Gone the night
Once more
Flee
About the Creator
Mohammed Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/
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Comments (3)
Truly gorgeous, Mohammed!! 🥹❤️❤️ Also, the diminishing style works divinely with your words here!
Gosh this was so breathtakingly beautiful!
Lovely words, just lovely. Well done, Modammed!