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more guns please

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By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
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more guns please
Photo by Vladimir Palyanov on Unsplash

Imagine we could build a gun

That fired kisses one by one

Bullets of love penetrating deep

Shot into hearts that couldn’t weep

Sending love through the air

Marking the end of war and despair

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About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“When life gives you lemons,

Know you are asking for them.

If you want oranges, focus on oranges”

🍊🍋💥🍋🍊

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  • ThatWriterWoman8 months ago

    Now wouldn't this be lovely! Yes please!

  • Now this is a gun that I want! How I wish this really existed! You're so amazing to think of this!

  • Addison M8 months ago

    This was excellent! Short, nice rhyme and not what I expected at all. Well done!

  • Kenny Penn8 months ago

    Fantastic poem! I wish we could, the world would be a better place

  • Test8 months ago

    I love this so much, I love that you got me a bit with the title since for some reason my eye goes there with the notification, then I saw your name next to it. Really beautifully done.

  • Love it 😍

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Yes!!! More like this. Spread the word!

  • Paul Stewart8 months ago

    Love this, Kayleigh! Well done!

  • your profile taj mahal. I'm proud to be Indian. 'Bharat mata ki jai'

  • Real Poetic8 months ago

    That would be awesome!

  • Rachel Deeming8 months ago

    If only. This was wonderful.

  • Alex H Mittelman 8 months ago

    Lol this is funny and probably going to get top story!

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