deep down in a dark, gold dusk,
You told me that our link was born
In the star of lace
A Red, cool, deep beam
You hold me in your vast hand,
Like a hill, peak, warm and soft...
Milk Moon Eyes, is the way we feel
The rich, pure, kind of
Care,
So very soft
And like a
Wisp
Of sky....
I will see
no
One
But
You
Moon
Milk
Eyes
Like Kore I was lost,
You tore open the dead veil,
New life is here
Zest and zeal you gave me,
A soft spot I have for you.
I more than
Need you, my dear.
You are my Moon Milk Eyes Muse
And I care for you
In
The
Deep web
Of our lace star
We are one.
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Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos.
I am Bexley is published by Resurgence Novels here.
The Half Paper Moon is available on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella Carnivorous is to be published by Eukalypto soon! Coming soon
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Dear best bestest friend, Big hugs from me for your pms and emotions. I’ll be here all day and night and tomorrow and next day lol and next if you need to vent or talk. I’m sorry. I agree once I get away from the Raven my health should considerably get better. The stress of it all definitely does not help. Even when I’m sick they are emotionally draining and try to force me to answer things I feel too exhausted & in pain to too. Like, “are we together forever” and I do not have enough energy to argue. Even to someone that never hurt me, that’s a weird question! Thank you for your sweet kindness and support my dear! Hugs!!
By Melissa Ingoldsby10 months ago in Poets
Snow Need to Rush
I watched my breath form a small white cloud as it puffed out of my lips and dissipated before my eyes. I rubbed my hands together, blowing into them with the precious bit of warm air that remained in my lungs. My leg bounced as I stared into the cold dark world beyond the windows of my truck as they remained partially fogged up.
By Donna Fox (HKB)7 days ago in Fiction
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Oooh I loved this one! The language and structure... gorgeous work! x
I'm guessing this has nothing to do with the Raven. May you be blessed, my friend, to know such love in your life.
Your poem was brimming with love! And I loved it so much!