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Moments of Distraction

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By Moe RadosevichPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
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Moments of Distraction
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Distinctive visions of moments in doubt,

Incessant thoughts of moments without,

Serpentine slithers of moments gone by,

Tempestuous cravings of moments denied,

Revelations revealed of moments in glory,

Acceptance granted of moments from worry,

Calculated risks of moments in danger,

Traditions withdrawn of moments with strangers,

Inductees proud of moments with honor,

Obsessions foreseen of moments to wonder,

Narrow divides of moments to ponder.

Thanks for ready, a goofy poem from a goofy mind 🧐🧐

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Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

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  • The Invisible Writerabout a year ago

    I really liked what you did with the first word of each line Excellent prose

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Goofy meets poignant Nicely Done

  • Cendrine Marrouatabout a year ago

    I find this poem fascinating. The repetitions work really well to distract the reader. You are taking us with you on the ride. Great job!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Love this line "Incessant thoughts of moments without". Those words embrace all that distract us. I actually read this yesterday, but phone needed to be charged before I could comment. Excellent job my friend, not goofy at all β™₯️

  • Oh wow, this was so brilliant!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Very nicely done.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Well done!!! Loving it!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’•

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Get down with your goofy self, compaΓ±ero! Great job!

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