Micro, Macro
Building Blocks
H2O, droplet
Fill a glass or fill a tub
Raging ocean, flood
.
Smudge of dirt, pebble
Garden plot or field of grass
Mountain, canyon vast
.
Wisp of breath, breezes
Bend the trees or swell the sail
Harsh tornado tail
.
Dancing light, flicker
Roasting food or warming face
Blazing Sun's surface
About the Creator
Abigail Penhallegon
I'm an aspiring novelist. I've started many stories and just recently become more confident in my abilities due to the encouragement of great friends and teachers. I'd like to spread joy through my writing, so prepare for happy endings. :)
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Comments (6)
This is beautiful and like a fun, magical adventure! There is so much happening; I love it!
Love it!
I like the cadence - each verse is like a dance!
Wow, this was so beautifully written!
all four are well fine, my fav is the breezes, swell the sail, I saw it swelling 👍😃
Very nicely done.