not sure how to put this
things are fucky and askew
i need to know in simple terms
…what the fuck did i do?
was it something that i said?
something that upset the crew?
you can’t leave me dangling like this
…what the fuck did i do?
was there an invisible line that i crossed?
sorry – didn’t have a fuckin clue
so perhaps you’d like to explain to me
…what the fuck did i do?
i need to know where the problem lies
is it me or is it you
and again quite slowly and clearly
…what the fuck did i do?
was there some secret ritual i besmirched
i didn’t know; did you?
i’m with Jimmy on this one
…what the fuck did i do?
About the Creator
Brenton F
Every letter in every word in every line is a burden I no longer have to bear, how much is not enough, how little is too much?
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Comments (5)
100% relatable and bonus points for The Wire!
Lol! Great piece, Brenton! I’ve definitely felt this more than once in my life. Loved it! 💫💞
This was so relatable as I do feel this way sometimes! Loved your poem!
lol and standing ovations...people can suck it Great read, great flow and as always playful and deeper the more it is read
Marvelous McNury!!! Love it!!!❤️❤️💕