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Make Me Feel

A Haiku

By Raquel ChandlerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Blue Haiku Challenge
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Pull your fingers through

My tresses, dark and tangled;

Beat my spirit blue

heartbreaklove poemssad poetry
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About the Creator

Raquel Chandler

20 something learning through writing

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  • Poppy 8 months ago

    Gorgeous haiku! Impressively evocative

  • Alison McBainabout a year ago

    Very vivid imagery - congrats, Raquel!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Congratulations! Well done!

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Lovely and evocative. Congratulations on your win

  • MA Snellabout a year ago

    I think a lot of poetry falls on the wrong side of the border between subtle and powerful; not yours. This is gorgeous. Thank you 💙

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