Make Me Feel
A Haiku
Pull your fingers through
My tresses, dark and tangled;
Beat my spirit blue
About the Creator
Raquel Chandler
20 something learning through writing
Pull your fingers through
My tresses, dark and tangled;
Beat my spirit blue
20 something learning through writing
Comments (5)
Gorgeous haiku! Impressively evocative
Very vivid imagery - congrats, Raquel!
Congratulations! Well done!
Lovely and evocative. Congratulations on your win
I think a lot of poetry falls on the wrong side of the border between subtle and powerful; not yours. This is gorgeous. Thank you 💙