You walked through the door, and my heart went boom
Magnetically drawn to your soul from across the room
Strikingly cute with a smile that could melt butter
Sensually deep voice that sends my heart a flutter
I tried to fight these feelings, choking them down
But my heart takes flight whenever you’re around
One look into your eyes had my heart beating out your name
One conversation with you, and I knew I’d never be the same
I tried to tell myself no one feels this way with a single glance
But heaven help me, your magnetic soul leaves me in a trance
About the Creator
Britt Blomster
I'm a writer, poet, storyteller and dreamer. I'm inspired by the world around me and channel that into my writing.
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Comments (5)
Wow , electrifying poetry for sure ♥️🥰
Omg, I loved this so much! So beautiful! Reminded me of "Enchanted" by Taylor Swift.
Re-read. Previously 💖Love your love poem💕
Nicely written poem with a good sense of time and rhyme.
A beautiful poem