Luxurious Limerick
Dessert topping
The city haze sparkled and gleaned,
As the smog turned purple and green,
The residents stood in awe,
Harvesting the gore,
And smothering it on their ice-cream.
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Colleen Millsteed
My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.
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Comments (4)
Excellent!!! Love this!!!💖💖💕
Purple and green do seem like a beautiful combo of colours to be on an ice cream, lol!
love this so much, Colleen!
This is wonderful. Well done.