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Love Song in the key of Dream

By Veronica ColdironPublished 5 months ago 1 min read

In the rivers of a diamond sky

On a dark night just like this,

Three men set out on a boat.

The stars winked by.

The moon blinked an eye.

Nodding, the men did float.

The Art of Scott Gustafson

Sing me a song of sixpence

Before I rest my eyes.

Let me kiss your sleeping lips

Before the magic dies.

You’re my destined prince come true

My hope on you relies,

As we go bobbing in our boat,

Among the sparkling skies.

And in my rivers of diamond sky,

We sleep in a lullaby boat.

Dragons go by as they guard the night,

From their seat in a milky way moat.

"Moon Dragon" Piece on Etsy from Art of Deb

And I’m a fairy princess girl

Arms wrapped around my prince.

And as we sleep, our dreams we keep,

In sheets of purple chintz.

Because fairy tales,

Make pleasant dreams,

For the child within our hearts.

They tell of love

We hope to see.

In sleep their magic starts.

Full Moon Fairy Princess by artist Judith Cheng - Courtesy of Fine Arts America

Sing me a song of sixpence, baby

Before I rest my eyes.

Let me kiss your sleeping lips

Before the magic dies.

You’re my destined prince come true

My hope on you relies

As we go bobbing in our boat,

Among the sparkling skies.

Image by Young L. on Deviant Art

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About the Creator

Veronica Coldiron

I'm a mild-mannered business consultant by day, a free-spirited writer, artist, singer/songwriter the rest of the time. Let's subscribe to each other! I'm excited to be in a community of writers and I'm looking forward to making friends!

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  • Lamar Wiggins3 months ago

    Magical, and left me in awe. Excellent poem!

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Lovely!! Loving this lullabies!!!💖💖💕

  • Awww, your lullaby was so wonderful! So magical and nostalgic! Loved it so much!

  • So well written

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    This is a gorgeous poem, love it 🥰

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    I don't think I can say it better than anyone else. This was a magical poem with such vivid imagery and impeccable flow. I felt transported on a little adventure and loved it!

  • This is pure magic

  • Feels so nostalgic!

  • Deasun T. Smyth5 months ago

    this dream was told beautifully. and the art really added to it. great poem!

  • Dana Stewart5 months ago

    A Milky Way moat - gorgeous! This poem is surreal and vivid. Great job. The art is phenomenal, really adds to the visual experience.

  • Novel Allen5 months ago

    Wonderful song/poem. Love it.

  • E.L. Martin5 months ago

    Sweet and beautiful. Your image selection is perfect. I can easily read this to my son at bedtime. It definitely captures the childhood storybook feel.

  • Diani Alvarenga5 months ago

    A beautiful poem with beautiful images ❤️

  • Gina C.5 months ago

    This is so gorgeous! Like a lovely lullaby. I loved this line: “Sing me a song of sixpence, baby”…. Amazing!

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    Love, love, LOVE!!! Wow! This is phenomenal. I felt carried through the most amazing dream. Winner!!

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