Loving My Honey
The Crab Canon poem — A difficult form for many
And what do you say to this!
He is mine and I am his
In all the world over
we found each other, and he is my lover
Until death do us part
and ever after
he has my heart
Hollering it from the rafter
I love my big bad John
He is my Hon
He is my Mon!
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He is my Mon
He is my Hon
I love my big bad John
Hollering it from the rafter
he has my heart
and ever after
until death do us part
We found each other, and he is my lover
In all the world over
He is mine and I am his
And what do you say to this?
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Authors Note: Crab Canon — say it one way, then say it backward and have it be two different messages. It is rough and tough even for sages.
My Husband just turned 75 on March first of this year. I really appreciate his love and care as we age together.
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First published by Write Under the Moon on medium.com
About the Creator
Denise E Lindquist
Retired, working part-time as a Native American culture consultant. I have an MSE, and an ABD. I write on Vocal, and Facebook. Poetry, non-fiction mostly, and working on fiction. Wife, mother, grandmother, and great grandmother.
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