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Loving Hands

from sea to sea, always, aways lovin' me

By ROCK Published 3 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Loving Hands
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each crease, line, place, time, furrowed bits of a well worn kind, deep within memories cast, shadows fading ever fast, soft, safe in mother's hand, crossing to another's land, washing, raw, red, and chafed, all to keep another's space; bleeding, giving all you could, kneading life, for another's good; recipes bled between worn threads, all to keep the family fed, living on rations, ne'er to resign to the place your momma left behind, brushing hair, steaming dresses, all the while, braiding tresses, always ready, to use those hands to keep things steady, when they ached no one knew, you gave it all as your family grew, tender times, stitched within your heart of gold was strength that shined, you were so bold, you kept on going while other's wept, then one last time with your kitchen swept, your hands reached out and took in mine, dearest Grandma, my Valentine.

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ROCK

Writing truth or fiction, feels as if I am stroking across a canvas, painting colourful words straight from my heart. I write from my old farmhouse in Sweden. *BLOGLINK

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  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    It feels like this woman was such an incredible anchor, you've really captured that.

  • Awww, this was such a wonderful tribute! Sending you lots of love and hugs ❀️

  • Beautiful memories & tribute. You ROCK, my friend.

  • Randy Baker3 months ago

    Beautiful poem, beautiful tribute!

  • I love this beautiful poem! It flows so smoothly and tells a beautiful story. Well done, Rock!

  • Rene Peters3 months ago

    This is beautiful! πŸ’œ

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