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Loving Distraction

An Acrostic for the Dancing with Distraction Challenge

By Paul StewartPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Loving Distraction
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Don't...give up

I know it's hard

So many things in life are bringing you down

Trying to snuff you out

Right now, where your head's at

Actually scares me, but I can't argue or dismiss your feelings

Could we agree to discuss it more...to give it time?

This decision you're about to make - you only get to make once

I...don't want to lose you....I don't want you to lose you

Obstacles, though they seem insurmountable now, are only temporary

Never feel alone. You are never alone.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection is now available!

https://paulspoeticprints.etsy.com

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  • Brenton F10 months ago

    Another great piece for our perusal and edification - loved it! So fresh and full of good!

  • Lena Folkert10 months ago

    Ooph. This was hard to read but something I really resonate with right now. Not at all what I expected from this challenge but beautifully done!

  • Heather Hubler10 months ago

    Gah, this made me feel too much...I knew there was a reason I didn't comment before. I loved the gentle encouragement and support in your words. The other parts were hard to read. Lovely work, truly :)

  • Donna Fox (HKB)10 months ago

    Paul, this was so beautiful, uplifting and inspiring! These were some words I needed to hear/ read today! Thank you! 💜

  • Excellent poem & message. Though I do have one question. How long before "temporary" legitimately becomes more like "chronic" or "permanent"? (Asking for a friend.)

  • Ruth Stewart10 months ago

    You are pretty nice sometimes. ❤️👍☺️

  • Ahna Lewis10 months ago

    Inspiring words! A powerful reminder to keep fighting and to graciously offer understanding, patience, and encouragement to ourselves or those in our lives who may be struggling. This poem truly sounds like the voice of a caring friend. Nice work, Paul!

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Wow. This is really powerful. The line about only getting to make that decision once hit hard. Well done, my friend.

  • I wish some people know how deeply we actually care for them! Loved your poem!

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