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Loved Down

A poem

By Rachel DeemingPublished 2 years ago • 1 min read
Loved Down
Photo by Sarah Kilian on Unsplash

I used to love you

But now?

I don't know.

Bright elements show

And I'm captivated by the glimpse,

But then it gets blighted,

Smeared.

I don't recognise you in the distortion.

I need time.

I need space.

It's not allowed though

Because it will be the

Breaking of us.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Rachel Deeming

Storyteller. Poet. Reviewer. Traveller.

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    Written by Rachel Deeming