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I look to the vast sky
past time
at us
our vows
our life
hues and tint
joy and sin
reap and sow
our bond
a band
our ring
an ode no poem can pen
each beat, each word
burn the page it lays
they rage
We live on
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Jennifer David
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This is beautiful, Jennifer. Your word choice is exquisite, and it has a simple pace that simply rolls off the tongue. Well done, my friend!