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Laying in bed in the morning,
listening to hubby's loud snoring.
I jump out of bed,
and slap his big head,
with a slipper I found on the flooring.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (30)
😂
🤣😂🤣😂 I don't know why vocals playing. Just crown you the winner of limericks from here on to forever 😂
I'm crying now😂🤣
You guys are mean. Just shove him under the bed. Ha ha Cathy, bad Cathy.
Spectacular! If I were you, after I hit him with the slipper, I'd stuff his nose and mouth so he can't breath. If he wakes up on time, he lives. If he doesn't, well then it was his time to go. Lol! Loved your limerick!
ha ha ha!
Haha, the rhyme in last line made me laugh. Nice job!
LOL :)
LOL!!
LOL! I think this is how my wife feels.
Hubby better remove all slippers from the bedroom 😀
Lol, I love it! 😂
lol! My hubby wakes the bears out of hibernation with his snore! Love this 😀
Confession... my hubby is actually the snoree, not the snorer in our household... hopefully he won't read this and get ideas!
HAHAHA!!! I love that he had to have a 'big' head. And of course he got slapped with a slipper. Too funny!!! You are like a limerick queen already!!
Oh, Cathy I need to go have a beverage with you. I really need to know what goes on in your head. Too funny and I know my wife amy agree with this.
Awesome flow! Well done 😍
This was great!! I think it was kind of you to use a slipper and not something harder hahah
Lol - I’ve experienced this kind of snoring firsthand. Well done!
LOL!!! Cathy you are on a roll!!! Loved this!!!💖💖💕
We had a female relative staying over last Christmas that made me feel as if I had forgotten a buzzsaw in the next room. I love this, and completely sympathize with the slipper!
LMAO! That was great! nice work once again. :)
That was great! Easy to see you do exactly as you say lol
Ha! Good one!
This is fabulous!🤣