Dancing
In the wave of your attraction
Seeing only my desire, for satisfaction
Touching
Real
Affection
Closing into
Tumbling alluring
Intense moments
On the road to
Noticing my reaction
About the Creator
Antoinette L Brey
I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure
Enjoyed the story? Support the Creator.
Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Keep reading
More stories from Antoinette L Brey and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (6)
This is very nice. I love the easy flow of your words and the natural rhythm of the phrasing. Great work!!!
This is gorgeously written
Antoinette this was a beautiful poem, it felt romantic and passionate. Nicely done!
so few words that say so much - excellent work!
Lovely
Awesome!!! Loved it!!!