Poem- 006, Lost Trust
A world of fire and ash,
spun through the webs of time,
the thread that spiraled,
through the water's brine.
A mist so agile,
swirled so perfectly, within the tile.
not seen for a hundred miles,
lost within a nile,
of… You… You…
You stare within my eyes
a look so stern,
so vile.
Leave me with nothing,
not even a trial,
be as you please,
I’ll stay hidden,
within my trees.
Return is not,
for you left,
my loyal to rot.
A soft hum,
buzzed within a gift of rum.
Forgiveness in the brink of expectation,
you intrude with no invitation,
my heart is not,
to fall without being caught.
A war of emotion,
stole my sanity,
A lust at all high,
shared in vanity.
You say to give trust,
I believe it's all a bust.
Here is where you may find,
words hurt, they stand in line,
to tear and break at the lies,
more poisonous than alkaline.
Though, this is not the intention,
despite your transgression.
This is a story of pain,
but not shared in vain,
offered in the words, a given relief,
seeped within our times of grief,
be it as it may...
So, be on your way.
- Kaliyah Myers, a Poem to a soon to be book named, The Mad Project
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Kaliyah Myers
"Change is imperative. But the kind of change is the most important detail."
In being a writer, I hope to share something relatable and adventurous that you can love too.
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