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ever felt incomplete
crying out for that missing piece
lost to the vast universe, hidden within its umbra?
I have
peace eludes me
slipping through my fingers despite how far I reach
elusive shadows, echoing my desperation
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Brin J.
I have a few stories and poems inside me that I want to share. Maybe, if I'm lucky, they'll reach people who'll enjoy them. 📖
Comments (7)
Ooooh, umbra! What a good word!
Good work. If I still led counseling groups, I would use this one.
This was so poignantly beautiful and emotional! Loved your Acrostic!
Another fantastic poem! Wonderful!
You are 2 for 2 Brin! Another beautifully written piece!
Oh, I agree, 'I have' hit so hard and just stopped me for a moment. Geez I felt every line and every word and every letter. I have too.
Mic drop of sorts. That "I have" line really hangs there in the void...just...so evocative and emotive...as ever, Brin...you have an inate ability to dig deep and eloquently express things!