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Lost Threads

Dancing with Distraction Challenge

By Shanice Steadman-OlliverPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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Lost Threads
Photo by Jené Stephaniuk on Unsplash

Disturbances are always tolerated

If they come with ideas about ideation!

Susurrating thought, drink

To the finest hole of escape under threat of

Real responses.

Art and

Chaos

The source of our making.

I toe a line in the sand for focus and sense

On which I would gratefully expire,

Never preoccupied again.

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About the Creator

Shanice Steadman-Olliver

"...Beauty is life when

life unveils her holy face.

But you are life and you are the veil." - The Prophet by Kahlil Gibran

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  • Camille Helmuth11 months ago

    Line 9-11 is so beautiful. Keep creating!!

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