Longing
Oh, how you tempt me so
Distant as always, aren't you?
Isolation from you burns me like a branding rod
Somber and ever so dazzling in the moonlight
Too much of you and too little of me
Running towards you only leads me to my own demise
Acrimonious and hostile, swallowing all those that float atop you
Calming is the only way I would describe you, though
To love you and stay with you is the only dream that I peacefully sleep to
I yearn for you more than I can withstand, why must it consume me so?
Ocean waves so heartbreakingly beautiful, they tempt me
Never have I wished to drink and cry it all out as when I look at you, my love
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Nupur Parikh
26. i enjoy naps, cats, and writing. that’s it.
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