Separated by distance,
Your absence weighs heavy,
Yearning for a conversation,
Yet you're occupied, I see.
I revisit our old exchanges,
Smiling at our beginnings,
But tears well up,
Recalling our joyful innings.
Longing for these moments,
More than words can convey,
Just one more conversation,
Is all I wish for today.
We could relive our happiness,
Don't depart this way,
I fear I'll be broken,
Please, come back, I pray.
We'll paint new memories,
In hues of laughter and glee,
Together we'll navigate,
Life's unpredictable sea.
Don't let our story end here,
In the shadows of regret,
With you by my side,
We'll rewrite our duet.
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Ming Xiao
A poet weaving tales of love, fiction, and motivation into captivating verses. Join me on a journey through the realms of emotion and imagination, where words dance to inspire and touch the soul. ENJOY❤️
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I promise her. I'd do anything for her. She's my mom. Even as Lanie and Deanna are flying home, Mom is scrappy fighting dying. She lays too still in that too-big bed with all the toasty white hospital blankets, in the south tower, at the broad end of a long slow-turning corner that delivers me again to her private room with the view she can't see through, with the beeping that tells us nothing new, and all these ice chips she can't swallow, and a flood of well-intentioned nurses who cannot do a damned thing all the same.
By Christy Munson5 days ago in Fiction
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Renewing a relationship... beautiful lines, well done!😊