Lonely is the night
Inspiration, motivation, encouragement for anyone that needs it.
Alone is the night
alone is the fight
Alone is the time
when you feel
Everything at once
When you feel
everything is loss
Escape - impossible
Release - a myth
redemeption is
Nothing
but a fabled fantasy
Thoughts of bravery
are rendered
powerless
Delusions of grandeur
That your failings
Are greater than
All your successes
The twilight lie
Your betraying mind
proclaims
to hold you captive
to keep you down
Lonely is the night
But don't
Give up the fight
See past the dark
to the truth
in morning light
Escape is possible
Release is real
Redemption
is
Everything
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Author's Notes: Inspiration and encouragement for anyone that needs it.
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Paul Stewart
Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.
Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.
"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson
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This is a FLAILY FACE x 10! So powerful, Pal! I know this feeling and you wrote is so incredibly well. But these lines...T H E S E LINES : "See past the dark to the truth in morning light" Holy shit. That's all I have to say about that. Rocked my world. That's like a book title, a t-shirt, a poster, a motivational print, a Paul quote that'll go down in history. I think I'm going to write that one down and post it on my pin board. I'll quote you, of course. Damn, Pal, that's profound. Sorry for all the curse words in this comment, but that was a jaw dropper.
Good one!! “Redemption is everything”!! ☺️👏
Your inspiration poems are becoming an unofficial series to me. I’m loving them! ‘But don't Give up the fight See past the dark to the truth in morning light’ That is so powerful.
I'm at the point where I'm comfortable in the dark, lol. But for the sake of humanity, I'll try to find the light hehehehe. Loved your Paulitical poem! 🍩🥐
I really like that observation that delusions of grandeur kind of work both ways.
Wow this is superb! A wonderful rallying cry, with deep emotional insights. 👏❤️
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"See past the dark to the truth in the morning light..." Great poem... just take it a day at a time.
'But don't Give up the fight See past the dark to the truth in morning light' Well said and what a wonderful positive addition to add from the negatives that sneak into our in life.
Unless of course, by morning light it all looks the same or worse. When the daymares are worse than the nightmares, that's when I just want to go back to sleep.
Just about sums up where I'm at right now , This flowed so well and the message is lovely 🤍