Your face is so cute
like fresh sweet roses.
a gorgeous damsel to be with.
your smile is like white sea sand
Your laughter is a sweet melody to my ears
when you are away, I feel your presence,
your scent in my house is like a sea breeze.
For you, I have a special affection.
Your soul is like a germ for me to take care of.
your good behavior is a blessing to me
your life is like something I could keep active forever
your heart secures a special place in mine
my feelings get more active when I gaze at you
Like fresh, sweet roses, you fill the air in my house.
your beauty is something I haven't seen
your love is something I can’t resist
my feelings for you are something I can’t dismiss
I give you my whole heart
I give you my love—the love I can’t take elsewhere
I wrap my arms around you every night.
Together, we triumph, me and you.
About the Creator
Gloria Penelope
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It is brilliant for me Gloria!
A very sweet poem - two comment - I think "germ" was meant to be "gem" and the photo is lovely but orchids, not roses.🌹❤️
I love this! So sweet and touching!