Oh, light
how brightly you shine,
An enduring light amid the deepest gloom,
You make even the most hazy sight clear,
and you gently lead me through life.
You provide me with a warm glow
that illuminates my route,
guiding me to where I need to go.
You motivate me to study and grow,
and you pour joy, hope,
and flow into my heart.
You serve as a constant reminder to me that,
even in the darkest of times,
there is always a ray of hope and grace,
and that, as long as I follow those rays,
all will work out in the end.
Therefore, I salute you,
Oh, Light,
my steadfast companion.
May you be radiant until the very end
and May your love
and warmth never wavers as you lead
me through life as my most authentic blend.
Thank you for reading!
About the Creator
Jazmin Fernandez
Hello Beautiful soul🕊️Here I am an imaginative freelancer, and marketer with a passion for storytelling and creating meaningful content. Writer, creator, such as articles, novels, scripts, poetry etc.
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Comments (2)
Such a wonderful prayer in the form lf a poem! So beautifully written!
A great ode to light and life.