moments
ripple away
as the sun starts to set
earthly journey almost complete
reflect
color bursts of life's memories
lessons captured or lost
most precious gift...
more time
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D.L. Finn
D. L. Finn is a multi-genre author. Her work includes the paranormal, poetry, memoir, romance, fantasy & children books. She is also a blogger, photographer & reader and encourages everyone to embrace their inner child.
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (14)
Hi Denise, your poem is beautiful and speaks to something we all struggle with - time management.
Wonderful, Denise!
More time. This speaks to me now more than ever. Beautifully done, Denise.
This is so serene and yet so poignant, Denise. A love poem!
A meaningful poem. It is amazing how sitting by water, and watching a sunset makes us all so mindful. Time is indeed a gift.
Absolutely beautiful! The words, the photo...perfect!
So beautiful, Denise. "color bursts of life's memories...." That says it all!
Your poems always inspire, and I agree time is so precious, especially when we have little of it left. eden
Excellent reflections of a life well lived looking back at the moments experienced. Shalom aleichem
Beautiful, Denise. "lessons captured or lost" -- the moments more precious as they disappear. ❤️
Denise, this is so beautiful and evocative! It made me feel peaceful just reading this. Bravo 💕🙂
This was so pretty! Time is such a gift! 💕
A true gift. More time. A beautiful poem, Denise
This is a beautiful poem. Sunsets are beautiful, and I wished they lasted longer. The sunsets of our lives aren't always beautiful, though they can be.