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Silly dances, funny faces, invisible bees chasing us down a street
tripping over feet, running into spiderwebs, listening to songs on repeat
life is full of absurdities, growing like flowers in our lives, falling in love
first kisses, first dates, first fights, just trying to keep our heads above
water…in a crazy world you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate
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Your poetic style is engaging and lively, with a good sense of rhythm and flow. The imagery you use is playful and whimsical, evoking a sense of wonder and delight. The contrast between the silly dances and funny faces and the more serious moments of falling in love and navigating the ups and downs of relationships is also well done, creating a sense of balance and nuance in the poem. The final line, "in a crazy world you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate," is a lovely way to wrap up the poem, tying together the themes of absurdity and love in a poignant and meaningful way - you a new subscriber!
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I feel like I’m in my 20s again. Thank you
Beautiful ❤️The absurdity of falling in love in this crazy world is definItaly worth noting and you have done that beautifully with poem. Congratulations on your top story too!
The sparks we make when we're in love ❤. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your Top Story 🤗
This is a fun poem.
Excellent writing ❤️💯✨ Congratulations 🎉
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Love this!!! Congratulations too!!!💖💖💕
What a Beautiful, Heartfelt piece! Congratulations on making Top Story!😊
Very sweet, love the picture too.
Congratulations on Top Story!!
I love this! Simply beautiful!
Congratulations on Top Story!
Congratulations on your Top Story
Wowza, who wouldn't want to hear that??
Beautiful poem 🥰
Awww, I loved 'my beautifully awkward fate'. This was so sweet and endearing, well done :)
So beautiful!! 😍 Love this unique spin!!
This was so wonderful!
Beautiful poem. Very well done