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Life's Absurdity

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By The Invisible WriterPublished 11 days ago Updated 10 days ago 1 min read
Life's Absurdity
Photo by Azrul Aziz on Unsplash

Silly dances, funny faces, invisible bees chasing us down a street

tripping over feet, running into spiderwebs, listening to songs on repeat

life is full of absurdities, growing like flowers in our lives, falling in love

first kisses, first dates, first fights, just trying to keep our heads above

water…in a crazy world you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate


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The Invisible Writer

"Writing is easy. All you have to do is cross out the wrong words."

~Mark Twain

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  • Stevi-Lee Alver3 days ago

    Thank you for sharing

  • Your poetic style is engaging and lively, with a good sense of rhythm and flow. The imagery you use is playful and whimsical, evoking a sense of wonder and delight. The contrast between the silly dances and funny faces and the more serious moments of falling in love and navigating the ups and downs of relationships is also well done, creating a sense of balance and nuance in the poem. The final line, "in a crazy world you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate," is a lovely way to wrap up the poem, tying together the themes of absurdity and love in a poignant and meaningful way - you a new subscriber!

  • Rasheek Rasool6 days ago

    Beautiful and Fun

  • I feel like I’m in my 20s again. Thank you

  • C. H. Richard8 days ago

    Beautiful ❤️The absurdity of falling in love in this crazy world is definItaly worth noting and you have done that beautifully with poem. Congratulations on your top story too!

  • Loryne Andawey8 days ago

    The sparks we make when we're in love ❤. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your Top Story 🤗

  • Robbie Cheadle8 days ago

    This is a fun poem.

  • Safeera Sathar8 days ago

    Nice 👍

  • Excellent writing ❤️💯✨ Congratulations 🎉

  • Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • aly suhail9 days ago

    great and amazing

  • Babs Iverson9 days ago

    Love this!!! Congratulations too!!!💖💖💕

  • Tiffany Gordon 9 days ago

    What a Beautiful, Heartfelt piece! Congratulations on making Top Story!😊

  • Madison Newton9 days ago

    Very sweet, love the picture too.

  • Heather Hubler9 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Ahna Lewis9 days ago

    I love this! Simply beautiful!

  • Dana Stewart9 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Wowza, who wouldn't want to hear that??

  • Scott Wade9 days ago

    Beautiful poem 🥰

  • Heather Hubler9 days ago

    Awww, I loved 'my beautifully awkward fate'. This was so sweet and endearing, well done :)

  • Gina C.10 days ago

    So beautiful!! 😍 Love this unique spin!!

  • This was so wonderful!

  • Cathy holmes10 days ago

    Beautiful poem. Very well done

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