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Life's Absurdity

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By The Invisible WriterPublished about a year ago β€’ Updated about a year ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - March 2023
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Life's Absurdity
Photo by Azrul Aziz on Unsplash

Silly dances, funny faces, invisible bees chasing us down a street

tripping over feet, running into spiderwebs, listening to songs on repeat

life is full of absurdities, growing like flowers in our lives, falling in love

first kisses, first dates, first fights, just trying to keep our heads above

water…in a crazy world you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate

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The Invisible Writer

"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"

Charles Bukowski

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  • Donna Fox (HKB)11 months ago

    This was beautiful Will! Such a sweet and heart warming love poem! πŸ’œ

  • Kristen Balyeat12 months ago

    Beautiful! I love this-lots of magic here!

  • Shannon Loewenabout a year ago

    I love that last line, "you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate." Thank you for sharing!

  • Stevi-Lee Alverabout a year ago

    Thank you for sharing

  • Your poetic style is engaging and lively, with a good sense of rhythm and flow. The imagery you use is playful and whimsical, evoking a sense of wonder and delight. The contrast between the silly dances and funny faces and the more serious moments of falling in love and navigating the ups and downs of relationships is also well done, creating a sense of balance and nuance in the poem. The final line, "in a crazy world you are my absurdity, my beautifully awkward fate," is a lovely way to wrap up the poem, tying together the themes of absurdity and love in a poignant and meaningful way - you a new subscriber!

  • Rasheek Rasoolabout a year ago

    Beautiful and Fun

  • Maureen Colleran Batteyabout a year ago

    I feel like I’m in my 20s again. Thank you

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Beautiful ❀️The absurdity of falling in love in this crazy world is definItaly worth noting and you have done that beautifully with poem. Congratulations on your top story too!

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    The sparks we make when we're in love ❀. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your Top Story πŸ€—

  • Robbie Cheadleabout a year ago

    This is a fun poem.

  • Safeera Satharabout a year ago

    Nice πŸ‘

  • Excellent writing β€οΈπŸ’―βœ¨ Congratulations πŸŽ‰

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your Top Story!

  • aly suhailabout a year ago

    great and amazing

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Love this!!! Congratulations too!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’•

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    What a Beautiful, Heartfelt piece! Congratulations on making Top Story!😊

  • Madison Newtonabout a year ago

    Very sweet, love the picture too.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Ahna Lewisabout a year ago

    I love this! Simply beautiful!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Congratulations on your Top Story

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Wowza, who wouldn't want to hear that??

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem πŸ₯°

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Awww, I loved 'my beautifully awkward fate'. This was so sweet and endearing, well done :)

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    So beautiful!! 😍 Love this unique spin!!

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